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Princess of the Elves Newbie Karma: 23/1 16 Posts
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speechless..
you're right. they are very situational but you can still feel the emotion behind them. especially the second one. you are quite the poet even if you don't want to admit it. your poems are really honest and people can relate to them.
Posted on 2011-07-05 at 22:11:49.
Edited on 2011-07-05 at 22:18:44 by Princess of the Elves
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Chessicfayth Cheshire Cad Karma: 107/3 1206 Posts
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time for another shameless....
....bump.
looking for more comments on this, and my first set please.
Posted on 2011-07-12 at 22:09:45.
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Jing Of Shoulder Fame Karma: 24/0 153 Posts
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Quite good~
I think one of my friends would very much like the first one. The second one is my favorite, though. Very simple, but very strong. I approve. <3
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 00:29:51.
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Celeste Hippy-snapper! Karma: 138/3 1049 Posts
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tasty tasty apples
Well done, Chess! I agree with Jing ~ both are good, but I think my second is my favorite one ^_^
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 00:34:54.
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Eol Fefalas Lord of the Possums RDI Staff Karma: 475/29 8864 Posts
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Hmmm... situational?
Iiiiii dunno... I suppose the metaphors could be seen that way to a certain extent but, overall, I think there's more of a philosophical turn to them, somehow.
Again, very well done, my friend.
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 14:55:24.
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