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Zyphuer
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Down Thyme
You try to tell me it's broken but i can see its clearly working,
I'm deaf not blind, don't have enough reasons to unwind,
And can't say it right most of the time
but I know how to sift through the grime
from all the bulls*** that doesn't even rhyme,
all the lies and espionage after I gave you food and lodge.
Don't even know why i tried so hard
just to be someone to discard,
turned on so quick my brain's jarred,
Mind is wayward, approaching the cord and pulled
but its in again and I wont be twice fooled.
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 16:38:42.
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Eol Fefalas
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Interesting...
...kind of "spoken word-ish"...
Mind if I ask about the inspiration behind this one?
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 17:04:21.
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Zyphuer
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flo
actually the friends i have are from dallas and sometimes we sit down with instrumentals and flo, this is one of mine that was on the spot, i liked it and wrote it down
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 17:14:10.
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Eol Fefalas
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Nice...
...I'm diggin' it. 
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 17:20:44.
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Zyphuer
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possib le
I can put one of my actual poems up if you want to critique
Posted on 2011-07-13 at 19:12:51.
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